GreyWolf and I talked about this in person. Here are some comments. I also collected a few from chat from others.
In General
- I think this shade of red is good, it catches the eye without being annoying. It remains to be seen how well it would blend with the back of a card, depending on the colors of the background. It may look good also with a greyish blue, though a bit more bland.
- I think "cyborg chronicles" should use a monotype font, probably Consolas to match the word "Card". Someone also suggested to capitalize like "Cyborg Chronicles" but that may change the alignment a bit. Personally I like small letters just fine.
- The "SHIFT" font suggests like a quake, as if it were a shift in tectonic plates causing an earthquake. Someone suggested to try maybe a motion blur or other effect instead, to suggest movement perhaps.
Top logo
- We think the size/shape of this logo would look great on the back of a card. Probably not so much on a web site, although we could still use it if we used say a vertical menu on the left instead of horizontal menu.
- The bold vertical "C" red line seems very thick, it may look better if it was maybe 25-30% thinner or more even. Or perhaps hollow it out and make the outline of the line the same thinkness as the rest of the "C".
Bottom logo
- We think this one would look great on a website, or say, a game box or board, but no so much on a card due to its elongated shape.
- I think you should work in that red color, perhaps the hand of cards outline would look good in red.